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04/18/2007 4:22 PM

whats up guys im new here, and i really appriciate critism ^_^

During their annual roadtrip to the deserted town of Whitman, the Densen Family noticed a limping man on the side of the road. This man had a suspicious aura to him, the kind of presence that says, "Help me." Jerry, the father of the Densens, pulls the car over to confront the man. As he approaches the back of the man, the mysterious person turns around as if he expected Mr. Densen to approach him. Right as Jerry was about to speak, the man simply said, "Leave," and then kept on his merry way. Jerry was left dumbfounded on the side of the empty dirt road. Jerry has a striking thought. "Where was the locals? Where was Gran-Gran? (the whole reason the family to the trip)? Where was anybody?"

04/18/2007 5:22 PM

Welcome to the RPGC, Varon!

I'd recommend having a look at some of the other RP threads and recruitment to get a feel for how ideas are generally "pitched" on here. You seem to have your idea, but people generally need to know more about the plot before they're willing to commit to a thread.

Good luck! :)

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