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kawai
07/08/2005 5:30 AM

umm well i havent been on this site long so give me hints if i'm doing somthin wrong ok? but not to harsh

anyone can come to this thread, particularly people who have dealt with Orcs before

i think thats it please join this thread

Occ thread post there if you want to join

kawai
07/08/2005 5:33 AM

ok the setting is a forest with a small pond in the middle of it, not too many rocks but if any there huge! i shall post my charries Bio when someone replyes

dizzy
09/09/2005 7:42 AM

ok i'll join

Alchemist_of_Time
09/09/2005 1:20 PM

I'm not sure what time it is, but if someone is on this thread I say lets go!

kawai
09/09/2005 6:08 PM

hi i thought no one would ever join!

dizzy
09/10/2005 5:44 PM

well, you thought wrong huh, silly

Damien
09/10/2005 6:24 PM

Besides there being absolutely no background or other necessary information: You mispelled 'valley.'

And how about posts that aren't a sentence or less in length?

Or how about actually joining existing RPs to get your skills functional before trying to run your own RP.

Or how about not using the RP thread as if it were the OOC thread -- there's a reason they're different, you know.

kawai
09/10/2005 8:21 PM

ok jeez, give me a break. this is old you know? i left it cuz know body joined, i thought it was deleted but i guess not

Damien
09/10/2005 9:38 PM

Two months isn't that old, champ. If you want it deleted, ask the staff. They'll be happy to delete your thread.

kawai
09/11/2005 10:32 AM


If you don't like it then don't come in here bitching about the post

thanks dizzy
i agree but i really don't wanna get in trouble.... heh

Kalia_Majere
09/12/2005 5:40 AM

okay, way off topic here people. Damien, delete your last post. Dizzy, Kawai, as stated before, it is much better for you to join other threads (I know the site has been slow) before you make your own. I have my own thread "Witches Wheel" that will probably be starting full swing within a week. Check it out and post in the OOC section first.


And yes, Damien was trying to give some advice, while he may seem overly caustic at times, this wasn't one of them; at least not till that last post. No one is really in 'trouble' here, unless you count those little one-liner posts as trouble (as some of us actually do) your posts are consistent with some rp "Chats" not an actual post by post rp forum. you have to be more descriptive, you are trying to make the reader feel where you are, what you're doing and all that... and you're definitely not doing it.

Also, As I'm having Damien delete his last post, Dizzy, Keep the foul language to a bare mininum... unless it has something to do with the actual rp.



If I wanted your oppinion, Id tap my zipper


Comments like this, dizzy, can get you banned from the site. Don't do it again.

thanks...

Kalia_Majere
Exec. Producer of FFRP and Gaming

Roik
09/12/2005 7:10 AM


ok the setting is a forest with a small pond in the middle of it, not too many rocks but if any there huge!


This is a really bad description. You should describe the world, the atmosphere, the time...is this a fantasy world of sci-fi ? And I dont think its important how 'big' the rocks are. You should create a world first.

dizzy
09/12/2005 12:22 PM

he did give a setting, but not a time

kawai
09/12/2005 3:51 PM

sorry*beats self with stick falls over..*

Damien
09/12/2005 10:00 PM

He gave a setting in a literary sense, not a game sense. In a game sense, he gave 'terrain.' Terrain is not setting -- setting refers to the details about the world, races, themes, features, creatures.. etc. Forgotten Realms and Dragonlance are 'settings.' 'A forest with big rocks' is terrain and is completely useless information without -world- information backing it up.


I say it again, this person has no business starting an RP and should instead seek out existing RPs to learn how all of this works.

Roik
09/13/2005 2:51 AM

Kawai, Ill help u out. Your little vision inspired me to write so if u want u can take inspiration from it.

Then forest was not silent anymore. It was not silent for 2000 years now, since the orcs moved in. Building burrows under tree roots, hunting wildlife, cutting down trees for fun.
the greenskinned hordeĀ“s numbers were increasing at a extreme rate and every son was twice as evil as his father.
After some time, the forest was not enough for them to cause chaos. They started raiding nearby villages, killing foresters and plundering defensless homes.
They brought all their pillage to a pond that was in the center of the forest, as a sacrifice to the God of Pond they worshipped in so blindly.

Time has come for a change now, for a band of heroes were called to slay the Orc leader in hope that the orcs would disperce without him.
Call of adventure, fame and definetly not least gold brought the brave sould to the entrance of the forest. They could hear some wild battle cries from inside...the orcs were probably fighting amongst eachother again.

dizzy
09/13/2005 7:12 AM

thats fine with me

kawai
09/13/2005 5:39 PM

nice! oh o luv it! :3

Dark_Lupin_King
09/15/2005 1:03 PM

((OCC: Well I guess there is no sense posting in the OCC even though I beleive Damien is in the complete right. Anyway here is my charaters bio, i am sure there will be no problems with him?

Name: Van Hongard
Age: 17
Weight: 159 pounds
Height: 5 9
Hair: Short/Black with White tips
Eyes: Green
Outfit: Common Shirt, Pants, Shoes/Black Cloak
Weapon: Steel Short Sword, Amulet of Control*(Allows Van to change at will)
Race: Werewolf
Power:
1) Regeneration (negated to silver)
2) Transform: Werewolf* (full moon)*
3) Communicate to other canines
Other info:
A young man of 16, Van helped his Father hunt werewolves during fall during the festival moon, which meant feeding time for werewolves. For the past five years Van and his Father hunted a certain werewolf who always eluded their traps. Then towards the end of the most recent Festival they cornered him in a church outside of Vans village. This time the werewolf set the trap for the hunters and had slain Vans Father and turned him into a werewolf. Vans Father in a primal rage attack Van infecting Van as well dooming his own son to dread the full moon forever. ))

kawai
09/15/2005 4:57 PM

mines on the occ page i tink..., my charries a slave to the orcs. they captured him cuz he ran, they might not eat you if you run)

kawai
09/22/2005 12:14 PM

Samuel sat chained to a tree awaiting the orcs to summon him for his duties, they captured him many many years ago. He had run from a battle with them, they found him cowering in a tree. They captured him in a net and made him there slave, most of the others they ate. Samuel was lucky, he sighed his ears twitching. He looked around, no one was coming yet he senced something. 'it's nothing' he thought, his tail moved back and forth as he waited. Samuel wondered if he would ever escape from there enslavment......

He was 19 now, it had been 3 or 4 years sence they captured him. He wondered why they hadn't eaten him yet? Most of the others captured with him were eaten, maybe it's because he was a demon? Samuel didn't really know

[Edited by kawai on Friday, September 23, 2005 3:00 PM]

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