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02/04/2007 8:44 AM

hi people i'm new here and i thought that i might start an RP and so i did, if you want to join of course ask but you can just post i dont mind.

02/05/2007 9:30 AM

it looks good but you need to make some have some sort of story line and a character sheet. not to be mean or anything but there isn't really any structure to this.

02/05/2007 10:29 AM

erm, i don't know what to say, i have always written like this for school and never had any teacher come back and say that but i will look at it again and edit it, but first can you explain better whats wrong with the structure please?

02/05/2007 11:47 AM

we don't know were we are or why were there, we don't know the races, we don't know the gods, and we don't know what we can do.

02/05/2007 1:31 PM

well, i'm keeping it open for suggestions, otherwise i would have stated all of that so others can progress the story but what i will say is that the races are elf, drow, dwarf, human, necromancers and whatever other monsters or races people want to provide.
and the place is your ordinary fantasy with different realms magic and other sklls of that type. as for the gods they aren't really involved much but can be at points in the story.

hope i helped.

02/06/2007 12:17 PM

I would expect that since this is the Dragonlance forum, that there would be some sort of Dragonlance structure... ie the Gods, races, cities, regions, high sorcery, time frame, etc. Also, a Necromancer is not a race. It is a specialist wizard that deals with the undead and the magic school of necromancy. It sounds to me as if you do not truely know the dragonlance world, so you may want to bring this to the general role playing area.

[Edited by Pyranthas on Tuesday, February 6, 2007 12:22 PM]

02/06/2007 3:52 PM

Thanks for the input pyranthus, i think you made the point clearer than i did : )

02/06/2007 6:26 PM

Hi and nice to meet you, wasuup. I'm Luni, and I help run the RP Forums here. I've been looking through your thread, and I think it may have potential, but in a more open forum, since nothing is specific to Dragonlance yet. So, I'll move it into the General Section for you, in hopes to give it more freedom to grow.

If you have any ideas for it, even in the slightest, perhaps you could post them in your thread, or repost them in the RP Query Forum, to get player interest. :) Either way, if you have any questions or anything, feel free to contact myself, Kalia Majere, or any of the Role-Play Sages (purple badges)

Good luck :)

02/06/2007 6:55 PM

Thanks for the move : ) now this will run a little better me thinks

02/07/2007 1:51 AM

ok, i see why got moved, and yor right more people are likely to look at it.

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