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07/10/2006 8:47 PM
ok, so i'm new, i needed somewhere to go to try this out... this place has promise, so here it goes...
The U.S.S. Kalihara is a sovergin class sdtarship that was lost during the middle of the dominion war, it just vanished one day and starfleet had abosultely no idea where it went, they assumed it was destroyed. this is the story of that missing starship...
The U.S.S. Kalihara was caught in the middle of a Dominion ambush en-route from the front lines, the Kalihara along with its' escorts two retro-fitted intrepid class ships, the U.S.S. Againa, and Treodiys. A Defiant, the Orinis, and one of the prototype Prometheus class ships, the U.S.S. Preyator... The Orinis was confirmed destroyed during the innital volley by the dominion ships, shortly after however, the Kalihara's sensors where knocked out, she was stumbling around blindly for only a moment before the hellstorm of fire ceased completley, on the sount of short circuts and internal fires remained...
This is where the story is going to start... there isin't much to it really. if its really popular i can bring the other ships back in for a little extra excitement.
07/12/2006 7:26 AM
Not a bad start from what I have read so far, but watch your spelling. At times it is difficult to read and this will turn people off. :)
I'll be keeping an eye on this.
07/12/2006 10:27 AM
Thanks for the heads up, i honestly didn't think that my spelling was that bad. i'll try to remember to run it through a spell checker before i post.
07/19/2006 6:58 PM
if anyone is at all interested in this, and has time plz join i'm already running into a road block in wrighting.
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