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09/26/2005 12:34 AM

Here's the concept I suggested earlier. Practically every species with any ambition has gathered in this city, and dozens of bands now vie for dominance. For more on the story, see Medieval-Based Dystopia in the RP Interest forum. So, here are the main types of characters needed for the RP -

- Band leaders

- Band members (soldiers)

- Solitary warriors, who prefer not to give allegience to one band

- Mercenaries

- Solitary characters, whose main purpose isn't in the bands' conflict

I'll be using a few NPCs, mainly Niall. To clarify, Tanau's men forced him into exile, but killed his other siblings - a great warrior's remaining bloodline, who might dethrone him when the fighting ends. He wandered the lands, gaining enough skill in combat to honourably kill Tanau. He assumes his family are either dead or have left, which is more than likely.

You're welcome to join whenever you like - approval isn't needed, and you're allowed to be Tanau if you like. Just go ahead and jump in.

The typical character profiles are appreciated too. I'll post mine soon.

09/26/2005 1:19 AM


[b]Age:[/b] 24

[b]Gender: [/b]Male

[b]Class:[/b] Ranger/rogue

[b]Primary weapon: [/b]Knives, sword, bow

[b]Armour:[/b] Light (leather)

[b]Appearance:[/b] Messy, dark hair; normally clean-shaven; brown eyes; medium height, built; tanned

[b]Alignment:[/b] Chaotic Neutral

Niall is a wanderer, a vagabond to most lands except his father's. Rumours of his existence are whispered in secret, that one last member of Moen's bloodline still exists. Tanau, the band leader who many expect to win the conflict, had his siblings killed to ensure the fallen hero's line couldn't take the throne which would probably be his. Though, in Moen's honour, he let one of them live, making sure he wouldn't return. Though in his fury, Niall swore to himself constantly that Tanau would die for killing his family and ridding the city of his legendary blood when it was needed. Unlike his honourable-to-the-end father, he sees the benefit in using methods of getting by which are usually looked down on, but believes firmly in dignity and fairness when fighting, if anything. He'll often use his skills for money and whatever else can be traded, when there's a well-protected jewel to be taken, or someone who can't be allowed to live and longer.

[Edited by Pillage on Monday, September 26, 2005 1:21 AM]

09/27/2005 3:07 AM

Hey again, Pillage. Have to say, I'm liking the idea and the first post. Had to kick around how I wanted to play this one.

I'm going for a band leader sort of character. The overly-ambitious make. The kind of guy that would probably ally himself with someone like Tanau if he thought that was the best path to his own success.

Redryn Gale

Age: 36

Gender: Male

Weapons: An intricately crafted sword that's mostly for show and a curved knife.

Armor: Heavy Cloth

Appearance: Usually well-groomed, but with the conflict in the city, tends to be grimy, something that wears on him. Light brown hair, cropped relatively short. Blue eyes. Smallish size, medium height, but slight of build. Pale skinned.

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

Background: Redryn Gale is a career politician, ever the one to strike at an opportunity for power. Through deception and cunning, he's always found himself well looked upon by the people he strives to dominate, but has never achieved any great power. His greatest ability is speechcraft, where he usually finds just the right words to get the reaction he needs. In the realm of politics, he's unmatched, but is inexperienced in combat situations.

With the conflict in Adanmegil, he's ventured there for the hope of finally gaining the power he so desperately covets. With a few stirring words, and the promise of plenty of glory, power, and plunder, he's formed band of merciless, but generally unskilled, warriors. In all likelihood, his main strategy would be to give the impression of strength to other bands and look to ally himself with those that could crush him otherwise.

I'm going out of town tomorrow (probably today when you read this), so I'll have to wait until Wednesday to post in the RP. If you have any problems, or suggestions, let me know.

09/27/2005 4:19 AM

Ah, this should be interesting. When you get back, go ahead and post in the main RP.

09/28/2005 1:14 AM

Bard Ravenshadow

Age: 26
Gender: Male
Race: Elf
Class: Rogue
Primary Weapon: Four Blades (exotic weapon, pair of double-sided black daggers)
Appearance: Coal-black hair, tied back; dark gray eyes; tall, very thin.
Alignment: Neutral
Background: Bard is a descendant from an ancient elf bloodline, one of the noble families that ruled the city before chaos took over. As a child he had trained to become a scribe in one of the libraries now used as a fortress for one of the fighting gangs controlling the metropolis. In the slow process of corruption creeping into the city his family of elven heritage was completely eradicated and he was left with nothing but single room in an over-occupied building, more than most in the city can claim to. Eventually he had to resort to thievery and found his nimble body was perfect for it, but his sharp mind was also good for retaining information. Twelve years later he is probably the best Knowledge-Merchant (a polite word for spy) in Adanmegil. He had worked for the few remaining nobles in the last years of law and didn't have to adapt too much to work for bandleaders. He manages to keep out of the way of more dangerous bands by choosing only certain high paying, low profile jobs. Working as little as he does, he stays in a higher financial class being also a seller of herbs from the far kingdoms of the south, the kind that are smoked for pleasure and frowned upon by many. Bard has killed a person or two, but only because he believed it completely necessary.

Here is my character. I'll change the character background if you don't feel it fits the storyline, but I really like the idea of having a "spy" kind of character.

[Edited by The_Bard on Wednesday, September 28, 2005 9:02 PM]

09/28/2005 2:25 AM

Nah, this'll be perfect.

09/28/2005 7:51 AM


[b]Age:[/b] 58

[b]Gender:[/b] Male

[b]Class:[/b] Warrior

[b]Primary weapon:[/b] Bow, sword

[b]Armour:[/b] None

[b]Appearance:[/b] Medium height for an elf; silvery-blonde short hair; grey eyes; fairly prematurely aging

[b]Alignment:[/b] Lawful Good

When the high-elves ruled, Loth was the king's personal bodyguard, and an acquaintance of Moen's. In the current anarchy, he takes to exploring the city and walking through enemy territory to pass the time. Though he's considered a friend to the wood-elves, the half-evles consider him an enemy, in retaliation to his race's newfound scepticism of them. Though he now has no king to serve, he's allied with the city's remaining high elves, who exist under no warlord, but still wander the city and look out for each other - even fight together when it's necessary.

I'll post a more detailed explanation of the relationship between elves later. For now, I need sleep.

09/28/2005 8:32 PM

[b]Regarding elves[/b]

Before the fall, all elves lived contently, though wood elves were even rarer then. Of course, some of the high elves were cautious about their half-blood brethren, but the rest happily acepted them. Though when order was lost and the bands formed, thse who had previously tolerated the half-elves became more wary of them, even attacking them at times. Most of the half-elves assumed the Imperials had taken a swipe at their throne, while trying to rid it of all but pure elves, and retaliated. Though many know this was just a misunderstanding, groups of high elves and half-elves still fight. Most prominent are the band of half-elves who now control the city's gates, and refuse to budge for their former allies. Of course, the Imperials live a lifestyle which requires many spies to support their folk, and can do it themselves if need be. The wood-elves, rare but not unheard of, are often found either suppporting both sides or taking one, but never against both.

10/01/2005 4:32 AM

Sorry about the slow-posting, but unfortunately it won't be remedied too fast. Getting ready to move, so things are a little hectic here, and will be for the next week. I'll try to get another post in tomorrow, but then it'll probably be a couple of days after that.

10/02/2005 1:24 AM

Because of my above statements, feel free to handle this scene however you'd like, Bard. I only ask that you not kill Grell and Erik. If you'd like to handle it more slowly with some back and forth, then that's cool too. It'll just be a couple of days before I can be sure I'll have the time.

I guess they weren't kidding when they said patience was a virtue.

And, just because I realized I don't really have much in the way of descriptions of the lesser characters I've thrown in here, and don't want to edit the posts I've already put up, I'll include short descriptions here.

Hargon "Briarback"

A tall, well-built man. Has bushy brown hair and a thick beard. Has a massive battle axe strapped to his back. Hairy arms and back.


Small man. Gray hair, with deep wrinkles around his mouth. Usually an upbeat person. Still wearing his vestment robes.


Burly, but not terribly large. Close-cropped black hair with a thick mustache.


Slender, with long, black hair. His shirt is sleeveless and he wears short gloves.

10/02/2005 5:30 AM


Age: 19 (appearance)

Gender: Female

Race: Demon Elf

Class: Rogue (Necromancer)

Primary weapon: Long Bow, pair Obsidian Dagger.

Acessories: Lockpicks, an assortment of bottled powders.
(eg. sleeping powder, poison, stunning spore etc.)

Appearance: Shaggy, blends in naturally with her surroundings, easily overlooked. Uneven messy white hair, shoulder long. Crimson red eyes. Pale Skinned. Slightly tall in height, but quite thin.

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

Background: Despite her present position in society, Rogue is rightfully the first child of the third house of Dark Elves. Her mother, Na'talah, gave birth to her fatherless, in the depths of the Underdark. Rogue nearly was accepted as a Drow, if it wasn't for Arwen, Na'talah's sister, who found out about Na'talah's secret tryst. The council didn't believe Arwen at first, seeing the rivalry between her and her sister, but when Rogue reached 9 years of age, her demonic side started to surface. Na'talah had nothing to deny, as the council took action. Na'talah was killed before Rogues very eyes and Rogue was banished.

Ten years, of wandering from town to town. Rogue learned how to survive and some Dark Magic from a necromancer. She nows finds a living upon doing dark deeds and stealing what ever crosses her interest in her travels.

Anything needed to be changed...?

10/02/2005 5:39 AM


Age: 18

Gender: Male

Class: demon

Primary weapon: a sword he dosent have, 1 knife

Armour: none

Appearance: cat like ears, blue eyes, blue hair, short for his age, has a tail with hair only on the very end, 2 golden earings in his right ear, a big yellow shirt on, skin tight blue pants

Alignment: none that he knows of

Background: He was born in a small village near a kingdom, when he was of 12 years he was put in jail. he had stolen a potion for his ill mother, he would have payed for it..... but he didn't have enough money. for 3 long yaers he stayed there, he escaped when a mercenary kidnaped the queen. he still runs from knights, he evades them everytime......

[Edited by kawai on Sunday, October 2, 2005 5:40 AM]

10/06/2005 11:43 AM

I'm digging this idea, and yeah Awsome! I'm so joining!

Species: 1/3 Felrine (Cat like) 2/3 Human.

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Class: Rogue/Prostitute(Argh :D)

Primary weapon: Dagger, Knives

Armour: Leather, Chainmail (not often worn.)

Appearance: 5'6" 120 lbs, navy hair, pale skin, lavender eyes (very purple) long black tail and black cat ears. Appears more human then cat.

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

Background: Cassandra was born in a country rarely visited. Her father was a military man, who abandoned the military to chase after a half-felrine woman. He was madly in love with her, and they were wed. She had a child, and raised her well. Though outcasted by the Felrine people, Cassandra's mother would often take her to the tribe. One day while they were there, their home was ransacked, and destroyed. When they returned, Cassandra's mother assumed that Argo (Her husband) had been killed, and went insane. She neglected Cassandra, and so the young girl had to take care of herself. Years past and Cassandra turned 15. Her mother killed herself, and left Cassandra alone. Knowing that she could not go to her Felrine kin, she fled to a human town, hidding her feline features, she joined the Temple of Bast, and begun worship there. She soon became accostumed to their ways, and adopted Bast as her patron goddess. For five years she lived there, until one day she heard news of her father. He was still alive, and so she left home to find her dear old daddy.

10/06/2005 1:28 PM

This definately caught my eye so I'll just go ahead and join.

Drake Boak

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Class: Warrior

Armour: Leather

Primary Weapon: Dual swords and a few daggers.

Appearance: He has short black hair that is spiked with two strands down. He has green eyes and tan skin. 5'9" and about 155 lbs.

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

Background: As he grew up he was trained by his father to fight. His father was a great fighter who didn't choose sides when the bands formed and merely protected those who he personally knew. Many people tried to recruit his father but he refused them all. When Drake was 15 his father died because a close friend led his father into a trap. Drake revenged his father when he was 17 by killing the band but, he never found the friend who had betrayed his father. Now, he is tracking down that friend and swears that he will never give up till he kills that man.

10/06/2005 6:57 PM

Hmm, mind if I play as that friend?

Class: Rogue/Prostitute

A holy furry prostitute? Fair enough :)

10/07/2005 8:59 AM

A holy furry prostiture? Fair enough :)

Yeah. I thought it was funny. Anyway.......

10/07/2005 1:34 PM

can i join or not???

10/07/2005 3:37 PM

It's an open rp, you can join.

10/07/2005 5:26 PM


10/07/2005 7:40 PM

Hmm, mind if I play as that friend?

Nah, I don't mind. I figured he could be one of Tanau's top men. That would give my character a reason to go after Tanau.

10/07/2005 11:11 PM

Sounds good to me :D

10/08/2005 3:29 AM

ok, don't expect my posts to be long though

10/08/2005 9:29 PM

Finally settled in, and my little hiatus is over. I'll get a post up shortly. I apologize for the inconviences.

10/08/2005 10:10 PM

Meh, wasn't a problem. I've been away most of the time too :)

10/11/2005 6:57 PM

[b]Uscias Slevin[/b]

[b]Age:[/b] 38

[b]Gender:[/b] Male

[b]Race:[/b] Human

[b]Alignment:[/b] Lawful Evil

[b]Weapons:[/b] Tiger claws, large one-sided battle axes

[b]Armour:[/b] Ususally none other than red cloth

[b]Appearance:[/b] Beginning to age, dark eyes, short black (grey-streaked) hair, tall, built

Uscian dwelled in the mountain regions as a soldier until Adanmegil's fall, at which point a few of the more corrupt fortune-seekers moved there to form and join bands. He left with a friend, who was killed not long after, when his gang was ambushed. Uscian instantly looked for the best-known leader, found Tanau, and gave the powerful boss his loyalty. Soon he became Tanau's top bodyguard, and at times paid killer. He's known as one of Adanmegil's most feared men, between his skillful weilding of heavy weapons, and his disregard of life and death - even his own.

10/16/2005 3:20 PM

[b]Alanna the daughter of the beron of Queenscove[/b]

[b]Age:[/b] 16

[b]Gender: [/b] female

[b]Class:[/b] noble

[b]Primary weapon: [/b] Shukusen(shaped like a fan, cherry red silk on thin, elegently pierced steel ribs that are dull at the base and razor sharp at the ends, when unfurled the open end can be used as a blade)

[b]Armour:[/b] None

[b]Appearance:[/b] Bright blonde hair cut sholder langh and normally in a messy bun, 5'9", Creamy pale skin, Dreamers eyes with a undeturmined curage learking behind them, a small nose, and lips always smiling. Always wears the next big fashon,and her shoes are always right there with it. When not at court finctions she wears her shukusen in her belt.

[b]Alignment:[/b] lawful

[b]Background:[/b] Just another noble. I would like to make her dramatic but I can't. She's kinda a snob, likes to gossop, complain and ask questions. She also has a nac for getting in the most unique situations, ones she has no need to be in and cant remember how or even why she is there.

I don't know why but I felt this Rpg was neglicting something. And then it came to me! So here I am your gossoping noble, this just makes it so that not everyone has the same 'Im gonna kill you' or serious attude thing going on. ^.^

[Edited by Alvanna on Sunday, October 16, 2005 4:01 PM]

[Edited by Alvanna on Tuesday, October 18, 2005 8:47 PM]

10/18/2005 9:06 PM

Anna is a solitary worrier who often fights who ever she feels like fighting for. Perferably if they're already fighting in large groops.

[b]Anna Kittas[/b]

[b]Age:[/b] 28

[b]Gender: [/b] female

[b]Class:[/b] worrior

[b]Primary weapon:[/b] Glaive, a 5 foot long wood staff with a led core, iron shoed on each end, and 18 inches at the tip of broadly curved blade. She does carry a long sword but perfers the Glaive.

[b]Armour:[/b] Light (leather)

[b]Appearance:[/b] Bright blonde hair cut sholder langh and normally in a messy bun, 5'9", Creamy peachy skin, bright aware eyes , a small nose, and lips always smiling. Normally wears a dark green outfit to highlight her green-hazel eyes, her shoes are comfertable

[b]Alignment:[/b] lawful

[b]Background:[/b] Raised by her parents but took after her father who was a mercenary(sp?). From her fathers work they never where poor. She was able to train under the best fighters around and do as she pleased. As her families only child she gets a good deal of money every couple of weeks and does't have to worry about working.

10/18/2005 9:58 PM

Chaos lead a small band of mercinaries befor they were wiped out he is a lone killer looking for a good faction ot allie himself with.

Lord Choas "The Dark"

Age: 215

Gender: Male

Class: Unkown

Primary weapons: Simple silver and black ninja sword and a self sheething double bladed sword (kinda like a swallow)

Appearance: Covered in black: He wears normal pants and boots. A Jerkin over a normal longsleaved shirt, and a cloak that covers his face. Only glowing read eyes are reveled.

Alignment: Good evil

Background: Created by a god simply for war, he desided that he needed a better perpose, so he was forced on to this realm by his god. He is sent here to help out with the chaos that surrounds the city.

10/19/2005 10:42 PM

I don't know why but I felt this Rpg was neglicting something. And then it came to me! So here I am your gossoping noble, this just makes it so that not everyone has the same 'Im gonna kill you' or serious attude thing going on. ^.^

Heh, I'm reluctant to admit it, but you're right :P Welcome, all.

12/07/2005 10:40 PM

We seem to have lost some participants... It's just been the three of us here for a little while.

12/14/2005 1:17 AM

Bah! Just the three of us is fine. We'll have a ball.

If it gets quiet, go ahead and make an alternate character.

01/19/2006 11:32 AM

Sorry for the absence guys. I've been quite busy and will continue to be but I'll manage to visit continously. I see the thread hasn't moved much. You're still there though right? Or am I talking to myself?

01/23/2006 3:00 PM

Pillage was just back and says he's going to be checking up on it, and I'm definitely still here.

02/08/2006 7:48 PM

Hey guys, I can only get on a few times a week, or when I'm multitasking with a project. If I'm gone for a few days and you feel like continuing, just go ahead and use my character in your move - though I can definately contribute at least twice a week.

We could use more people, if you guys know anyone.

02/17/2006 4:31 PM

That's a good idea. I'll drop a line to a couple of people around here to see if they're interested.

02/27/2006 3:29 AM

Well, I fear it could be a while before I come back here. You two are doing pretty well with the thread - one of you can take it in my absence. And if you can find a good Uscias, Tanau (who the GM could take) and Loth, by all means give them the character. I was thinking the elves could take care of Niall for now, and Loth takes his place while he's being nursed. So Niall doesn't really show up again until they face the enemy.

Good luck with it, all.

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