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02/28/2005 2:34 PM
(( Ok there are really no rules except post your wolf's info and then you can join but ask first,if you have read this post Silverfang she is the Alpha feamale.)
03/01/2005 9:17 AM
I'm going to give this thread a week, and if it doesn't get any hits from anyone, other than you, I'm deleting it. And if you must know why, it's because of this: You have no rules, no plot, and no information about what this is supposed to be for, other than boosting your member points.
And by the way, I'm being nice and generous by giving you a week with this thread. I could be super-bitch and make it go away right now.
03/01/2005 2:18 PM
Ok sorry there are some rules...
2.No human friends
3.you can have a blind wolf
4.Please no stranded pups
And a plot hummm.....Silverfang is both running and looking for someone running from her packs destroyers wolvers.And is looking for her brother Silvermane that got split up from her. I understand sorry I changed my mind sorry I didn't post it sooner and yes you could have deleated sooner,but thanks for not.
03/01/2005 6:26 PM
okay as this is my area of the site, I suppose I should step in....:P
anyway...Silverfang... oh boy you need some work hun.... first of all, Punctuation PLEASE!!! Yikes, reading your little paragraph there was like listening to a drunk ramble on.. I don't mean to be rude or mean, but sometimes certain situations warrant some sharper criticism.
Okay, that out of the way, you have got to be much more descriptive on your posts...much much more...this is more like writing a story, unlike P&P (tabletop) Rp... your writing must reflect that.
You need a bit more I feel, this seems to have a bit of the "Firekeeper" books flavor to them, the wolves in it are huge (they'll stand head to head with a human) and are quite intelligent, while they cannot speak per se, they communicate much much better than normal wolves.
I will set a post to show you how things should look. now you say your char's pack was destroyed, and looking for her brother? okay... I think I can try to work with this... Also, I would suggest looking around the forums more, to get a better insight on how things are run.
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